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*sweetbay May 24, 2009, 2:24:33 PM
First of all, I have to commend you for this beautiful work. The coat is shiny, the pose in excellent, the background is beautiful. Truly, this is one of my favorite works of yours, and I can see improvement.

However, there are tiny changes that cold be made to perhaps enhance it a tad bit. Overall, the conformation is very good, but a few things are a little off. The two muscles in between the front legs should be parallel with the shoulder, as seen here.

Second, the bone between the knee and fetlock, or canon, should be a little shorter. Your legs have very good preportion, but the front left just looks a tad long.

Lastly, the hip is slightly off in bone placement. As seen clearly here, There are two bones that point out of the top of the back legs. The top bone should be right next to the body in this position, and should stick out farther than the second, smaller one.

Other than that, amazing work, your traditional skills absolutely amaze me. The mane and tail flow beautifully. :aww:
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