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Artist's Comments
The Rightful King
Artist's Comments More TRK characters! Yay! So, this gal doesn't have a name yet, but I quite like her. She's not the typical breed, that's for sure, with her pony-like body and skinny legs. But that's important. I did this peice a lot differently than I usually do. I sketched something really fast over a frame, then colored it in. And I didn't erase the lines. I kind of like it. And cell shading. Good god, it takes so little time compared to my usual method. Albeit being much less detailed. I think, that if you guys like this style, then I'm going to do the comic this way. It was way fun, and quick. I did apply a texture for a more painted look, kind of like finding an old parchment. First time using a texture, actually. So anyways, tell me what you think. Information As noted above, this girl is definitely not the usual type of horse to be living in Melanthia, but here she is. She has the long, flowing mane quite uncharictaristic of them, and is more dainty. Not to be mistaken for arab though! No arab influence. You'll see her more later. Cast Credits Mare, Art (c) *sweetbay Reference (c) ~faraf-stock-xx Texture (c) ~Fall-Out-M |
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June 3
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Critiques
As far as the horse goes, her head seems a bit small, or more likely her neck is set too short, which makes her head seem a little too small. Her mid section looks fat because of her neck and she looks a bit high withered. (of course this is all easily fixable
Both her back and front lets look nice, the anatomy seems correct, especially the back legs, they look very nice.
The shading in her midsection is a bit strong, perhaps blend that in a bit next time? And her legs could use a bit more shading (especially the green one) Maybe added a little more shading and highlights to the mane and tail?
Also her breast muscles, horses have too big muscles in the front, I noticed that you made enough room for both of them but you only defined one, maybe add just a little shiver of shading in the middle to help define the other side. This will also help define her shoulder from her breast.
Her face is a bit cartoony but I like that
So over all very good job, just a few little things I would fix next time if I was you.
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